My GUM paragraph:
I choose these writings because I think the really showed my progress. For example in my first piece I didn't use apostrophes is some spots but, I do remember on that assignment I was rushed because I didn't know when it was due. Then on my second piece I didn't have many if any grammar mistakes. Also,on my sixth grade piece I used a word that didn't exist that now I wouldn't even think about using. In all not all of my work has perfected grammar and that's why I put myself at the securing mark.