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Actual Errors in Sentence
well ned my mom and dad are getting divorced and are fighting over me he lamented
(indent)“Well, Ned, my mom and dad are getting divorced and are fighting over me,” he lamented.
my big dapper brother in college who my family this is gods gift to parents nags me about my grades he continues
“My big, dapper brother in college, who my family thinks is God’s gift to parents, nags me about my grades,” he continues.
oh poor you said ned. i know what you mean i have a sibling just like that who drives me crazy
(indent)“Oh, poor you,” said Ned. “I know what you mean. I have a sibling just like that who drives me crazy.”
my dad is busy with his own new life and my mom thinks that im an infant. shes a real shrew about good grades too harold moaned
(indent) “My dad is busy with his own new life, and my mom thinks that I'm an infant. She’s a real shrew about good grades, too,” Harold moaned.
i no what you mean ned interjected. even if i do good i can never do good enough to please my mom
(indent) “I know what you mean,” Ned interjected. “Even if I do good I can never do well, enough to please my mom.”
as the weeks wore on harold adjusted to Burlington and its terrible nagging teachers
(indent) As the weeks wore on, Harold adjusted to Burlington and its terrible, nagging teachers.
conan and his “hip” crowd made occasional fun of harold and ned while cassandra and her freinds remained aloof
Conan and his “hip” crowd made occasional fun of Harold and Ned while Cassandra and her friends remained aloof.
one day a Rumor circulated around mrs kecks classroom and everyone couldnt wait for they’re class to be end
(indent)One day, a rumor circulated around Mrs. Keck’s classroom, and everyone couldn’t wait for they’re class to be end.
when class is finally over the popular students converged in the hallway
(indent)When the class is was finally over, the popular students converged in the hallway.
awesome said conan belinda is going to throw one of her incredible partys he expounded
(indent)“Awesome!” said Conan. “Belinda is going to throw one of her incredible parties,” he expounded.
to mourn aloud
I lamented when I fell in the mud.
(usually to describe a man) being neat and trim in dress or appearance
Charlie is very dapper.
one of two or more individuals having the same parents or sometimes only one parent in common
Siblings are very annoying.
a bad tempered women
My mom is such a shrew.
to say something abruptly, especially as an aside or interruption
I interject a lot.
to alter or move something slightly in order to achieve the desired fit, appearance or result
I adjusted my hat so the sun wouldn't get in my eyes.
not involved with or friendly toward other people
People who are aloof are not my friends.
to pass or cause to pass from place to place or person to person
I circulated the track in the 1500.
when several people or things come together from different directions to meet
Everyone converged in the lawn one the first day of school.
to explain and idea in detail
”We should make a new pen with new ink!” Tate expound.
Good Tech Pieces:
My nose was only smelling smoke, my eyes were watering and and my stomach had that nasty puking feeling. The mist was hovering over the water, the old rusty car just barely poking up over the lily pads and swaddling grass. The ruckus of the nuclear power plant just coming out of the fog. Lying there in the middle of the swap was a half submerged oil barrel. I wondered why people would do such a thing? What had happened to our pretty earth?