Thursday, March 31, 2016

My Analysis/Reasoning Paragraph

      I choose these pieces because I really think they showed how far I've gone from last year. For example in my first piece I just restated the the data I had said last sentence and I didn't say my one thinking. Then in my second piece I really showed my own thinking like saying a sentence put a chill down my back. Also I in my second piece I explained my evidence deeper and then said how that proved my point well in my first piece I didn't. In all these pieces definitely showed how I've improved. 

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