There are many reasons why I choose the pieces to show my improvement from the end of 6th grade. One reason is in my first piece my GUM wasn't the best because I didn't revise but on my second piece there was none because I revised. Another example is on my second piece the format was more clear because I had a better writing process. Lastly on my second piece my mom read over it for revisions which didn't happen one my first piece. In all I really think these two pieces show my improvement.